No need to be name calling now, it was constructive critisicm, I assume that's what we post decks here for correct?
While the deck is mostly solid, there are a few things that I feel could be improved on.
Jinzo with 7 traps probably isn't a good idea. If you insist on running Jinzo then replace Magic Cylinder with COTH, at least that way you're likely to be able to special summon Jinzo and have a good chance of keeping him on the field afterward.
SInce you're running 3 copies of Mystic Tomato it seems a shame not to make better use of it's searching capacity. Perhaps another copy of Newdoria rather than Pitch Black Warwolf.
Personally I think you'd be better off replacing Grammarg with Zaborg, it's just a higher utility monster.
A side deck of course can make or break your deck....care to share yours with us?
